Sporadically speaking

That was beautiful. By now, I feel almost retarded for the comments I make here. But there's not much more I can think of; you know what I think about your style and characterisation by now, and I love the idea of the hand symbolism you brought in. Especially the lack of perfection you describe there. The flow of the story is just captivating. One of my favourites so far; I dunno if it's the PMS or the drunken bliss here, but I find it really touching.