Fic & ramble

[narcasse]

Having made not much more headway with the pr0n I was attempting to write today I instead ended up writing entirely different pr0n:
Hortus Conclusus (2814 words. Non-con. [Heed the non-con warning, William fans.] Crossdressing. Pre-Silent Noise.)
Even in Rome itself some crimes go unpunished.


At least with this piece, despite its disturbing content I’ve managed to get over my reticence in using certain terminology in any of my more graphic writing. There’s a twofold reason I don’t tend to really: a) it feels too direct to be naming body parts sometimes and b) I’ve a tendency to worry that if I start writing about scrotums and anuses I’ll eventually end up with lines about one party cockslapping the other in the face. I don’t quite know how I’d work in a line about cockslapping someone but since the scene’s already set itself up in my head with a very annoyed Radu stating that you do not cockslap someone by accident I’m a little apprehensive of getting into that sort of territory for fear of what I’ll end up writing.

Maybe having got this out of my system before I start on a new drive to make unlikely pairings work I’ll now be able to finish up the piece I’ve been writing and edit another piece that I’ve been sitting on. But in the meantime I’ve helped stuff nekonexus’ fandom stocking, coloured in an icon that’s made me realise just how messy Sebastian’s hair really is and found my old Rubik’s Clock which having solved once I’ve seemingly lost the ability to solve again.


Slow cooking with Allegra McEvedy: there’s no need to get in a stew Telegraph.co.uk
(Stew rescuing tips.)

Comments

[levy.livejournal.com]

As promised, I read it. And I admit I was expecting something much more disturbing and graphic from the premises. I really liked the first part, the description of William's ability of caughting the oddities, his sense of guilt, the scene with the jar of oil... disturbing, yet well on the spot.

"You don't cockslap someone by accident" is, by itself, a memorable quote

[reichsfreiherr.livejournal.com]

I don’t think it gets much more disturbing than for a sympathetic narrative to follow a well liked character justifying raping someone really. Even the Dietrich/Autojäger piece I wrote ages ago involved Dietrich wanting to sit on some semi-functional lobotomised Methuselah and since the Methuselah were lobotomised there wasn’t a sense of emotional degradation to it. The worse part about this is the William is still essentially more good than evil but there’s a malignancy there that allows him to not just justify his crime but also makes him want to repeat it again this time with Isaak in a frock.